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Undone

A poem inspired by Francine Rivers' "A Voice in the Wind"

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Rachael Varca
Jul 21, 2025
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He longed for her,

In every fiber of his being he felt the thirst,

A constriction in his throat

As he watched her move on padded feet

Graceful limbs moving up above her head

Arms stretching up to remove the dish—

Hands brushing hair from her eyes,

Liquid green, entrancing—humor and light

Gaity da…

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